[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-blob-17

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 21 November 2022 17:01 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-jmap-blob-17
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-11-21
IETF LC End Date: 2022-11-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], 'Digest Alogirthms'-->'Digest Algorithms'
-[Page 25], 'a simiarly stable'-->'a similarly stable'