[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-19

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Mon, 24 September 2018 23:54 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-19
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-09-24
IETF LC End Date: 2018-07-09
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-27

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC after comments are addressed (i.e. no other comments than those already addresses on mailing list https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/netmod/1uKusZYy_SoXit6N43zvjad4rnE).

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Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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