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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 10 January 2018 19:36 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 10 Jan 2018 14:36:25 -0500
Cc: Vijay Gurbani <vkg@acm.org>, draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay.all@ietf.org, gen-art <gen-art@ietf.org>, bess@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10
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Vijay, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for addressing Vijay’s comment. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Dec 22, 2017, at 8:34 AM, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Vijay:
> 
> Hi!
> 
> Thanks for your review!
> 
> The registry has a FCFS registration policy, so at some point in the life of draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay the code points were requested — not necessarily in the draft itself.
> 
> Even though draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay is tagged in the datatracker to have replaced draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay, I think you make a good point in that the registry needs to be updated with the current/correct information.
> 
> Authors:  Please add a note in the IANA Considerations Section to have the reference in the registry point to this document.
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Alvaro.
> 
> On December 21, 2017 at 9:16:53 AM, Vijay Gurbani (vkg@acm.org <mailto:vkg@acm.org>) wrote:
> 
>> Minor issues: 
>> In S13 (IANA Considerations), I am not sure whether this draft is allocating 
>> the tunnel types or not. The responsible IANA registry [0] shows that the 
>> tunnel types mentioned in this draft are already allocated through a precursor 
>> individual draft [1], which has long expired. However, when I look at the IANA 
>> Consideration section in [1], it is empty! So I am not sure how the IANA 
>> registry in [0] received the allocations. I think the IANA section of this 
>> draft needs to be updated accordingly. 
>> 
>> [0] 
>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-parameters.xhtml#tunnel-types <https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-parameters.xhtml#tunnel-types> 
>> [1] http://www.iana.org/go/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay <http://www.iana.org/go/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay> (the expired individual 
>> draft itself is at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay-03 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay-03>) 
>> 
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