[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Sun, 17 February 2019 21:55 UTC

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From: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16

Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2019-02-17
IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-15
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21

Summary: Ready


Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

None.


Nits:

In the Abstract: s/section 4 of [RFC7333]/RFC 7333/
(because references are not permitted in the Abstract).

In Section 3.1, last paragraph: drop the '(' and ')'.

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dm… Russ Housley
Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Alissa Cooper
Re: [Gen-art] [DMM] Genart telechat review of dra… Moses, Danny