[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12

Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 03 January 2023 20:11 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2023-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document specifies the YANG data model for the Network Service
Attachment Points.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

It seems to me that the Network Service Attachment Points are very similar to
Network Termination Points. What are the major differences?

Thank you
Linda Dunbar

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-o… Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Linda Dunbar
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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert