[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-name-addr-guidance-01.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Tue, 06 June 2017 09:26 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-name-addr-guidance-01.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-name-addr-guidance-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170601 IETF LC End Date: 20170601 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 2 and 3 page 4: for curiosity, why did you change the order between ",;?"? (BTW what matters is to have a consistent order and it is the case) Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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