[Gen-art] review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Tue, 02 January 2018 22:49 UTC

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Document: draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171221
IETF LC End Date: 20180102
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - ToC page 2 and 10 page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1.1 page 3: I suggest to update RFC 2119 by RFC 8179

Note both comments can be addressed by the RFC Editor.

Happy New Year!

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr