[Gen-art] draft-ietf-scitt-architecture-18 ietf last call Genart review

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 28 August 2025 15:22 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-scitt-architecture
Title: An Architecture for Trustworthy and Transparent Digital Supply Chains
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-scitt-architecture-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2025-08-28
IETF LC End Date: 2025-08-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Small nit. Section 3 in the relying party term: a relying parties. Either
without the a or party instead of parties.

[Gen-art] draft-ietf-scitt-architecture-18 ietf l… Roni Even via Datatracker
[Gen-art] Re: [SCITT] draft-ietf-scitt-architectu… Henk Birkholz