[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-obsolete-dlv-00

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 17 September 2019 04:47 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-obsolete-dlv-00
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-obsolete-dlv-00

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-09-16
IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-18
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
-should this draft be listed as informational? It reclassifies standard RFCs as historic and updates other standard RFCs. Just checking.

Nits/editorial comments:

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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