Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Wed, 06 February 2019 03:59 UTC

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Date: Tue, 5 Feb 2019 21:59:46 -0600
From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To: Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com>
CC: Pete Resnick <resnick@episteme.net>, <gen-art@ietf.org>, <draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis.all@ietf.org>, <ietf@ietf.org>, <lisp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
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On Tue, Feb 05, 2019 at 07:56:39PM -0800, Dino Farinacci wrote:
> > Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last paragraph.
> 
> Are you sure? I just followed what RFC 8174 suggested. Give me reason to not follow it?

Yes, he's sure.

You pasted the text that 8174 inserted into 2119, when all you need is the
bit after "Authors who follow these guidelines should incorporate this
phrase near the beginning of their document:"

-Benjamin