[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Thu, 28 December 2017 09:30 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-12-28
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary: A clear will written document. Ready for publication.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: Not an issue with the design per se, but there is a school of
thought that says do not use all zeros or all ones in a protocol without good
reason since these are common uninitialized variable values. If the designers
have scope to do so they might consider picking another value.

Nits/editorial comments:

Slightly strange order of final sections. Most readers will want to look at
IANA and Security rather than worrying about the contributors.