[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 25 October 2022 06:01 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-10-24
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-27
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
comments than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 7] Section 5, "In order to to"--->"In order to"

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-a… Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Lars Eggert
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Mohit Sahni