[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15

David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 06 October 2019 04:49 UTC

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Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-??
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2019-10-05
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is clear and well-written.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: I believe references to RFC7525 should instead refer
to it as BCP195 to point to future revisions.