[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-12

[Ines Robles via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-12
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2023-05-26
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This document specifies procedures for representing and verifying the identity
of application services in TLS. It obsoletes RFC6125. The document is clear. I
just have minor nits-related-questions.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

*Section 6.1: "...a list of acceptable reference identifiers...": acceptable
according to whom? Maybe acceptable can be replaced by something like
valid/authorized/approved?, e.g. "...a list of valid reference identifiers..."?
What do you think?

* Section 7.5: "... limiting the number of names that any server can speak
for..." Maybe: "..."Limiting the number of names that any server can
represent..."? What do you think?

* Appendix A: What about to add a sentence such as: ...the title of this
document is different from the title of RFC6125 because...?

Thanks for this document,

Ines.