[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 20 January 2022 19:10 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2022-01-20
IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document ready for publication. It has couple of very
tiny nits that could usefully be addressed.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
ALPN is not well known and should be expanded on first use. It would be useful
to note that “doq” is a string. This is clarified below, but it is proposed
that that text be removed.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Lars Eggert