[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Mon, 25 February 2019 19:02 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-02-25
IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-26
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, no other comments than those already addressed on the mailing list.


Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], Section 2, "SFF (i.e, " -----> "SFF (i.e., "

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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