[Gen-art] draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Fri, 16 March 2018 09:10 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180315
IESG Telechat date: 20180320
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 5 page 6 (wording): and -> a or the or nothing? in
"extension MUST ignore and "max_fragment_length" that"
^^^ a
Regards
Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt Francis Dupont
- Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt Alissa Cooper