Re: [homenet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00.txt

[Ray Bellis <[e-mail]>]

On 08/07/2016 17:25, Ralph Droms wrote:
> I took a quick look at draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00, including a
> diff; seems the only change is to solve the .home problem.  I don't
> think I quite understand the new text and here's a suggested
> clarification:
> 
> OLD:
> 
> A default value for this TLV MUST be set, although the default value
> of the Domain-Name TLV (Section 10.6) is out of scope of this
> document, and an administrator MAY configure the announcement of a
> Domain-Name TLV for the network.
> 
> NEW:
> 
> The administrator MUST configure the announcement of a network-wide 
> zone suffix through the Domain-Name TLV.
> 
> As far as I can tell, draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00 does not address
> errata 4718.  While this errata has not yet been verified, in my
> opinion *something* has to be done to correct the text around
> "Multicast DNS Proxy".  If "Multicast DNS Proxy" is intended to refer
> to "Hybrid Proxy" in draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-03, the appropriate
> normative reference will constitute a downref in
> draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00.

The instruction to the authors were to incorporate the original .home
errata verbatim, and also to fix the error with options 37/38 being the
wrong way around in two diagrams.

If there is to be further wordsmithing on that we'd need to take that up
with our AD.

As for errata 4718, I fully expect that it will be incorporated in a
further revision just as soon as it has been verified (and subject to a
resolution of any resulting downref issue).

kind regards,

Ray