Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 10 February 2015 06:41 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015-2-10

IETF LC End Date: 2015-2-12

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 1 "PBU" and "WLC" are mentioned but the full name appears later
in the document. Should be specified when first used.