Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-16

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Wed, 12 September 2018 22:59 UTC

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Reviewer: Mahesh Jethanandani
Review result: Ready

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I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational
directorate\'92s\'a0ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG. \'a0These\'a0comments were written with the intent of improving
the operational\'a0aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed
in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. \'a0Document
editors and\'a0WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last
call\'a0comments.\ \ Document reviewed:
\'a0draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-16\ \ Summary: \ \ Ready\ \ Document
Abstract:\ \ \pard\pardeftab720\sl300\partightenfactor0 \cf2
\outl0\strokewidth0 \strokec2 This memo defines a portion of the Management
Information Base (MIB) for use with network management protocols in the
Internet community. In particular, it describes two MIB modules which will be
used by other MIB modules for monitoring and/or configuring Layer 2 and Layer 3
Virtual Private Networks that support multicast. \f1\fs26\fsmilli13333 \
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Comments:\
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The document defines a MIB for use with network management protocols. Other
than whether the module is correct and useful or not, which I have little
expertise in determining, there are no operating or management considerations
that need to be discussed.}