[Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-07

Timothy Winters via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 28 February 2023 22:06 UTC

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Subject: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-07

Reviewer: Timothy Winters
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just
like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve
them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more
details on the INT Directorate, see
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

Based on my review this document is ready for publication.

I was grateful to see the document handle IPv6 MTU in a reasonable fashion.

My only NIT with this document was I would clarify Section 7 ICMP error
messages are outside the tunnel to other IP proxies.  Other ICMP Error messages
not from the IP Proxy stay inside the tunnel.

[Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-masqu… Timothy Winters via Datatracker
Re: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-m… David Schinazi
Re: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-m… Timothy Winters
Re: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-m… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)