[Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-09

Timothy Winters via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 07 April 2023 12:17 UTC

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Reviewer: Timothy Winters
Review result: Ready

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just
like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve
them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more
details on the INT Directorate, see
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

I reviewed draft-07 of this document, and my suggested updates were addressed in -09. 
Based on my review this document is ready for publication.