[Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-11

[Bob Halley via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Bob Halley
Review result: Ready

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types.
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Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as YES.

While I am not an EAP or TLS expert, I found the document to be very clearly
written, in particular in its explanations of why various choices were made.  I
did not see anything worrisome in the document.

The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements)
with the document:

2.2: "when the j'th inner methods" seems like it would be better with "method".
4: "and then perform resumption using another EAP type, just as EAP-TTLS (Type
21)" should be "such as".