[Iot-directorate] Iotdir last call review of draft-rosen-rfcefdp-update-2026-01

Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 11 February 2022 14:44 UTC

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Subject: [Iot-directorate] Iotdir last call review of draft-rosen-rfcefdp-update-2026-01

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits

Document: draft-rosen-rfcefdp-update-2026-01
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Date: 11-02-2022

Summary:

The document does not include technical details or major issues.

Minor suggestion for a better understanding:

""In [reference], the responsibility for the RFC series is moved to the RFC
Series Working Group [reference if applicable] and to the RFC Series Approval
Board [reference if applicable].

The RFC publication is no longer the responsibility of the RFC Editor and the
role of the IAB in the RFC Series is altered.  Accordingly, in [reference], the
sentence "RFC publication is the direct responsibility of the RFC Editor, under
the general direction of the IAB" is deleted"".

Thanks for this document,

Ines

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