[ipcdn] Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (Management Event Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- and IPCablecom-Compliant Devices) to Proposed Standard

"Natale, Bob" <RNATALE@mitre.org> Tue, 15 January 2008 14:13 UTC

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In the DESCRIPTION clause of "pktcEventReset", it appears that
"resetEvDescrTable(1)" is used mistakenly where "resetEventTable(1)" is
intended (based on the repeated appearance of "resetEventTable(1)" in
the OBJECT-TYPE definition and no other appearance of
"resentEvDescrTable(1)" elsewhere in the MIB definitions).

Additionally, event the name of "resetEventTable(1)" for this
particular BITS element is misleading, inasmuch as it resets (to
factory defaults) only the "pktcEventText" column of the
"pktcEventTable".  My recommendation would be to change "pktcEventText"
to "pktcEventDescr" and rename "resetEventTable(1)" to
"resetEventDescr(1)".  Regardless, the naming needs to be harmonized.

Cheers,
BobN

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Subject: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (Management Event
Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- and
IPCablecom-Compliant Devices) to Proposed Standard 

The IESG has received a request from the IP over Cable Data Network WG 
(ipcdn) to consider the following document:

- 'Management Event Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- 
   and IPCablecom-Compliant Devices '
   <draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess-12.txt> as a Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action.  Please send substantive comments to the
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