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Re: [IPP] Subject: TIC has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments

Ira McDonald via ipp <ipp@pwg.org> Sun, 15 September 2019 12:19 UTC

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To: William Wagner <wamwagner@comcast.net>, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic@gmail.com>
Cc: PWG IPP Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org>
Subject: Re: [IPP] Subject: TIC has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
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Hi Bil,

Nope - it didn't get lost and did get noted.  There was just such a flurry
of responses Wednesday through Friday that Smih and I lost track a bit
in acknowledging them all.

Thanks for your response!

Cheers,
- Ira

Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG
Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic
http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc
mailto: blueroofmusic@gmail.com
PO Box 221  Grand Marais, MI 49839  906-494-2434



On Wed, Sep 11, 2019 at 10:53 PM William Wagner <wamwagner@comcast.net>
wrote:

> Some minor things. Line numbers refer to PDF.
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> line 791 “System Serviceand”  should be “System Service and”.
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> Line 1754 “Note: Appropriate Subunits are automatically associated with a
> new Printer object based on “printer-service-type”, inherent System
> capabilities, (out-of-band)System policies.”  Add “and/or” before
> (out-of-band)? Also, don’t understand following sentence. Also, seems to be
> missing “)” . Unintended font change?
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> Line 3471  “unique identier of the Resource” should be  identifier?
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> Line 3684  section Error! 3684Reference source not found.
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> Thanks, Bill W.
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