Re: [IPP] Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
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To: Cihan Colakoglu <Cihan.Colakoglu@dda.kyocera.com>
Thread-Topic: Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
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Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2019 14:45:35 +0000
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Subject: Re: [IPP] Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
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From: "Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) via ipp" <ipp@pwg.org>
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Thank you for your help, Cihan!
Smith
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Smith Kennedy
Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
HP Inc.
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> On Sep 12, 2019, at 2:35 AM, Cihan Colakoglu <Cihan.Colakoglu@dda.kyocera.com> wrote:
>
> Hello All,
>
> I have editorial comments on IPP System Service v1.0 :
>
> Page 177 – 182: Formatting of Section “18. Change History” Is messed up at multiple places.
> It is messed up at the source (Word Document) and carried over to the PDF version.
>
> · Line 4928 – 4963 : Larger font and larger line spacing compared to the rest of “Change History”
>
> · Line 5007 – 5009 : Line 5007 got broken into 3 lines (5007, 5008, 5009 should be 1 line)
>
> · Line 5068 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “14 February 2018” should be “February 14, 2018”
>
> · Line 5081 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “12 January 2018” should be “January 12, 2018”
>
> · Line 5088 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “17 November 2017” should be “November 17, 2017”
>
> · Line 5102 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “13 November 2017” should be “November 13, 2017”
>
> · Line 5103 – 5122 : Bulleting, indentation and word spacing got messed up.
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
> Cihan Colakoglu
> Kyocera Document Solutions
>
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