Re: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt

Dear Authors,

I think I'm within nanoseconds of sending an Approved note for this draft,
but then noticed a couple of things I wanted to ask about first.

I noted that Tom Petch had flagged

Looking at -13, it has
         bit unauth-test-encrpyt-control {
which AM thought should be
         bit unauth-test-encrypt-control {

which he had previously flagged in -12.

He also mentioned

And s.5.2 has
Advances Stream and Sampling Framework [RFC7312],
which I think should be
Advanced Stream and Sampling Framework [RFC7312],

Which seems to be new.

Are these proposed changes correct?

Is this citation

   [UML]      ISO/IEC, "Information technology - Open Distributed
                Processing - Unified Modeling Language", April 2005.

sufficient for the expected reader? I noted that Adam's question mentioned
"ISO/IEC 19501:2005", which seems like a helpful detail if someone were
chasing the reference.

Just let me know. I'm happy to do these as RFC Editor notes, if they're
correct.

Spencer

On Mon, Jul 2, 2018 at 4:05 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Performance Measurement WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP) Data
> Model
>         Authors         : Ruth Civil
>                           Al Morton
>                           Reshad Rahman
>                           Mahesh Jethanandani
>                           Kostas Pentikousis
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt
>         Pages           : 68
>         Date            : 2018-07-02
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a data model for client and server
>    implementations of the Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP).
>    The document defines the TWAMP data model through Unified Modeling
>    Language (UML) class diagrams and formally specifies it using a NDMA-
>    compliant YANG model.
>
>
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang/
>
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>
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