Re: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt

["MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <[e-mail]>]

The truncation happened at the same place, 
where I inserted some URLS & text.

At least it's deterministic.
I'll try again later...
Al



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> To: Mahesh Jethanandani <[e-mail]>; Spencer Dawkins at IETF
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> Subject: RE: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt
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> I'm re-sending, because the message came back from the
> IETF alias system truncated, and info on the reference
> was not included...
> 
> Hi Spencer,
> 
> Since I was investigating in parallel, let me add:
> 
> From: Mahesh Jethanandani [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Tuesday, July 10, 2018 4:16 PM
> To: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <[e-mail]>
> Cc: [e-mail]; Mirja Kuehlewind
> <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt
> 
> Hi Spencer,
> 
> On Jul 10, 2018, at 11:59 AM, Spencer Dawkins at IETF
> <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
> wrote:
> 
> Dear Authors,
> 
> I think I'm within nanoseconds of sending an Approved note for this draft,
> but then noticed a couple of things I wanted to ask about first.
> 
> I noted that Tom Petch had flagged
> 
> Looking at -13, it has
>          bit unauth-test-encrpyt-control {
> which AM thought should be
>          bit unauth-test-encrypt-control {
> 
> which he had previously flagged in -12.
> 
> Thanks for catching this. Yes it should be
> bit unauth-test-encrypt-control {
> 
> 
> He also mentioned
> 
> And s.5.2 has
> Advances Stream and Sampling Framework [RFC7312],
> which I think should be
> Advanced Stream and Sampling Framework [RFC7312],
> 
> Which seems to be new.
> 
> Hmm. I seem to be missing his e-mail that catches that, but I can see it
> in the draft. So yes, it should be:
> 
> Advanced Stream and Sampling Framework[RFC7312],
> 
> 
> Are these proposed changes correct?
> 
> Yes.
> [acm]
> 
> Let's add these as OLD/NEW to the REF Editor, Tom said that was fine...
> 
> 
> Is this citation
> 
>              [UML]      ISO/IEC, "Information technology - Open
> Distributed
>                         Processing - Unified Modeling Language", April
> 2005