Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01.txt

[François Simon <[e-mail]>]

Please, find attached the draft commented by Francois Simon.

If you have any questions, please let me know.

Sincerely,

Francois Simon

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Sent: Monday, February 20, 2017 11:41 AM
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01.txt

Hello IPWAVErs,

I submitted this -01 version addressing comments we received so far:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01

Please comment.  We could still discuss and make a better -02 before the deadline for Chicago.

This is the changelog:
o Introduced message exchange diagram illustrating differences
   between 802.11 and 802.11 in OCB mode.
o Introduced an appendix listing for information the list of 802.11
   messages that may be transmitted in OCB mode.
o Removed appendix sections "Privacy Requirements", "Authentication
   Requirements" and "Security Certificate Generation".
o Removed appendix section "Non IP Communications".
o Introductory phrase in the Security Considerations section.
o Improved the definition of "OCB".
o Introduced theoretical stacked layers about IPv6 and IEEE layers
   including EPD.
o Removed the appendix describing the details of prohibiting IPv6 on
   certain channels relevant to 802.11-OCB.
o Added a brief reference in the privacy text about a precise clause
   in IEEE 1609.3 and .4.
o Clarified the definition of a Road Side Unit.
o Removed the discussion about security of WSA (because is non-IP).
o Removed mentioning of the GeoNetworking discussion.
o Moved references to scientific articles to a separate ’overview’
   draft, and referred to it.

Alex

Le 20/02/2017 à 17:29, [e-mail] a écrit :
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Transmission of IPv6 Packets over IEEE 802.11 Networks in mode Outside the Context of a Basic Service Set (IPv6-over-80211ocb)
>         Authors         : Alexandre Petrescu
>                           Nabil Benamar
>                           Jérôme Härri
>                           Christian Huitema
>                           Jong-Hyouk Lee
>                           Thierry Ernst
>                           Tony Li
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01.txt
> 	Pages           : 32
> 	Date            : 2017-02-20
>
> Abstract:
>    In order to transmit IPv6 packets on IEEE 802.11 networks run outside
>    the context of a basic service set (OCB, earlier "802.11p") there is
>    a need to define a few parameters such as the recommended Maximum
>    Transmission Unit size, the header format preceding the IPv6 header,
>    the Type value within it, and others.  This document describes these
>    parameters for IPv6 and IEEE 802.11 OCB networks; it portrays the
>    layering of IPv6 on 802.11 OCB similarly to other known 802.11 and
>    Ethernet layers - by using an Ethernet Adaptation Layer.
>
>    In addition, the document attempts to list what is different in
>    802.11 OCB (802.11p) compared to more 'traditional' 802.11a/b/g/n
>    layers, layers over which IPv6 protocols operates without issues.
>    Most notably, the operation outside the context of a BSS (OCB) has
>    impact on IPv6 handover behaviour and on IPv6 security.
>
>    An example of an IPv6 packet captured while transmitted over an IEEE
>    802.11 OCB link (802.11p) is given.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb
> -01
>
>
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