Re: [lp-wan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02.txt

Ana Minaburo <ana@ackl.io> Wed, 24 May 2017 08:14 UTC

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Hello,

I’ve create a PR with the modifications, based on meeting consensus.

Ana

> On 19 May 2017, at 11:20, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
> 
> 
> Hiya,
> 
> On 19/05/17 09:43, Ana Minaburo wrote:
>> Hello,
>> 
>> Do you think you can add the consensus we got in last meeting about for the section 3 terminology?
>> 
> 
> Sure. What text would you like? (*)
> 
> Cheers,
> S.
> 
> (*) Ideally, via a PR for [1] but however you prefer is fine.
> 
> [1] https://github.com/sftcd/lpwan-ov <https://github.com/sftcd/lpwan-ov>
> 
>> thanks
>> Ana
>> 
>>> On 14 May 2017, at 11:32, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Hi all,
>>> 
>>> I've updated the overview document as planned (well, a week or
>>> two later than planned:-). I still have two open issues that I'd
>>> like to resolve before I'd claim that this is ready for WGLC so
>>> I'll send separate mails on those.
>>> 
>>> Other than that, it might be pretty close to ready, though your
>>> comments are welcome of course. (Either on the list or as a PR
>>> to the git repo.)
>>> 
>>> Cheers,
>>> S.
>>> 
>>> On 14/05/17 10:30, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area Networks of the IETF.
>>>> 
>>>>       Title           : LPWAN Overview
>>>>       Author          : Stephen Farrell
>>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02.txt
>>>> 	Pages           : 39
>>>> 	Date            : 2017-05-14
>>>> 
>>>> Abstract:
>>>>  Low Power Wide Area Networks (LPWAN) are wireless technologies with
>>>>  characteristics such as large coverage areas, low bandwidth, possibly
>>>>  very small packet and application layer data sizes and long battery
>>>>  life operation.  This memo is an informational overview of the set of
>>>>  LPWAN technologies being considered in the IETF and of the gaps that
>>>>  exist between the needs of those technologies and the goal of running
>>>>  IP in LPWANs.
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview/
>>>> 
>>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02
>>>> 
>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>> 
>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>> 
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