Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Tue, 22 January 2019 12:47 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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-32 has the RFC2119 boilerplate in the YANG module - thank you - but...
YANG modules must be plain text and

         "are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119]
          [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as
          shown here."

looks rather like XML/HTML anchors and not plain text.

Time idnits learnt what a YANG module looks like!

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>;
To: "Yingzhen Qu" <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>;; <lsr@ietf.org>;;
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Sent: Monday, January 21, 2019 9:07 PM
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on
draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29


> Hi Yingzhen,
> All the idnits warnings are fixed in the -32 version of the drafts.
> Thanks,
> Acee
>
> From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>;
> Date: Friday, January 18, 2019 at 5:35 PM
> To: "lsr@ietf.org"; <lsr@ietf.org>;,
"draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org";
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> Subject: Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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