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Re: [mile] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Thu, 02 June 2016 09:04 UTC

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Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2016 10:04:50 +0100
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Subject: Re: [mile] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Roman,

On Thu, Jun 2, 2016, at 06:15 AM, Roman D. Danyliw wrote:
> Hi Alexey,
> 
> Thanks for the review.  Responses to the DISCUSS and COMMENTs are inline
> ...
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Alexey Melnikov [mailto:aamelnikov@fastmail.fm]
> > Sent: Wednesday, June 1, 2016 3:34 AM
> > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> > Cc: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis@ietf.org; Roman D. Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>;
> > mile-chairs@tools.ietf.org; mile@ietf.org; mile-chairs@ietf.org;
> > takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp; mile@ietf.org
> > Subject: Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-22: (with
> > DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > 

 [snip]

> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > DISCUSS:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > 
> > I will move to yes when the following issue is discussed.
> > 
> > Robert Sparks' SecDir review reminded me: I am concerned by the
> > requirement to automatically download updates from IANA. If many devices
> > or software programs implement IODEF and start doing schema validation,
> > this can cause DDoS attack on IANA infrastructure.
> 
> A response to Robert's review can be found here:
> 
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mile/hSH9Ot6L_VTb9zYcJNZzO_c-7dc
> 
> Note: I posed a few questions back to the working group, so not
> everything is resolved.

Ok, I replied to that message.

> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > 
> > In 3.29.3.1: there is still a reference to RFC 822 (should be RFC 5322)
> 
> Actually, per Stephen's COMMENT on EAI
> (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mile/N52_1W9aXRw6gZSEqu0Y_vFuFh0),
> this likely needs to be RFC5336. 

Yes. Maybe keep both references?

> I'll make the change and also make it a
> real reference.  It's hard coded text now.

Good idea.

> > In 4.1: it would be good to point to the W3C XML document about rules for
> > escaping special characters. Otherwise readers might just think that all cases
> > are covered in this section.
> 
> Makes sense.  I'd actually prefer to remove the specific examples and
> just cite reference.

Works for me.

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