Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for CSIRT draft

"Haynes Jr., Dan" <dhaynes@mitre.org> Mon, 21 October 2019 20:38 UTC

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From: "Haynes Jr., Dan" <dhaynes@mitre.org>
To: "Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing)" <ncamwing@cisco.com>, "mile@ietf.org" <mile@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for CSIRT draft
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Hi Nancy and Stephen,

I have some minor nits and questions.


  *   Abstract
     *   Change “This document extends…to add the information type categories…(CSIRT) use cases.” to “This document extends…to add the indicator and incident information type categories…(CSIRT) use cases.”
     *   Remove “The indicator and incident information types are defined as ROLIE extensions.”
  *   Section 2
     *   Should this also reference RFC 8174?
  *   Section 3.1
     *   Change “…that in is the abstract realm…” to “…that is in the abstract realm…”.
  *   Section 3.1
     *   Change “Some examples of indicator information is provided below,…” to “Some examples of indicator information are provided below,…”.
  *   Section 4.2.2
     *   Is “Feed” a defined term?
  *   Section 4.3
     *   Change “day-to=day” should be “day-to-day”.
  *   Section 4.3.1
     *   Bullet 4: Change “…element in the attached MISP Event .” to “…element in the attached MISP Event.”.
     *   Bullet 5: Change “This ensures better compatibility…and a MISP Manifest” to “This ensures better compatibility…and a MISP Manifest.”.
  *   Section 5.1
     *   Change “If a ROLIE server supports…MUST be support” to “If a ROLIE server supports the incident information-type, then these link relations MUST be supported.”
  *   Section 5.2
     *   Change “If a ROLIE server supports…MUST be supported.” to “If a ROLIE server supports the indicator information-type, then these link relations MUST be supported.”
  *   Section 8
     *   Change “When sharing IODEF 2 documents…” to “When sharing IODEF Version 2 documents.”.

Beyond that, I am comfortable with moving this draft forward.

Thanks,

Danny

From: mile <mile-bounces@ietf.org>; on behalf of "Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing)" <ncamwing@cisco.com>;
Date: Monday, September 23, 2019 at 4:29 PM
To: "mile@ietf.org"; <mile@ietf.org>;
Subject: [EXT] [mile] WGLC for CSIRT draft

Fellow MILE participants,

This is a Working Group Last Call for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-rolie-csirt/

Please provide your review and feedback to the draft’s readiness by Oct 21st so that we can move it forward.

Warm regards,
                Nancy