Re: [netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8040 (5633)

Ignas Bagdonas <ibagdona@gmail.com> Thu, 17 October 2019 13:08 UTC

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From: Ignas Bagdonas <ibagdona@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Oct 2019 14:07:58 +0100
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8040 (5633)
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Hi there,

This applies to an example, and while factually correct, it does not seem
to be a technical errata as such, it is an editorial one

A nit -  a Date: header also needs to be changed.

Any objections?



On Mon, Feb 11, 2019 at 10:14 AM RFC Errata System <
rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8040,
> "RESTCONF Protocol".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5633
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Qin WU <bill.wu@huawei.com>;
>
> Section: B.2.2.
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>       PATCH /restconf/data/example-jukebox:jukebox/\
>           library/artist=Foo%20Fighters/album=Wasting%20Light/\
>           genre HTTP/1.1
>       Host: example.com
>       If-Unmodified-Since: Thu, 26 Jan 2017 20:56:30 GMT
>       Content-Type: application/yang-data+json
>
>       { "example-jukebox:genre" : "example-jukebox:alternative" }
>
>    In this example, the datastore resource has changed since the time
>    specified in the "If-Unmodified-Since" header.  The server might
>    respond as follows:
>
>       HTTP/1.1 412 Precondition Failed
>       Date: Thu, 26 Jan 2017 20:56:30 GMT
>       Server: example-server
>       Last-Modified: Thu, 26 Jan 2017 19:41:00 GMT
>       ETag: "b34aed893a4c"
>
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>       PATCH /restconf/data/example-jukebox:jukebox/\
>           library/artist=Foo%20Fighters/album=Wasting%20Light/\
>           genre HTTP/1.1
>       Host: example.com
>       If-Unmodified-Since: Thu, 26 Jan 2017 20:56:30 GMT
>       Content-Type: application/yang-data+json
>
>       { "example-jukebox:genre" : "example-jukebox:alternative" }
>
>    In this example, the datastore resource has changed since the time
>    specified in the "If-Unmodified-Since" header.  The server might
>    respond as follows:
>
>       HTTP/1.1 412 Precondition Failed
>       Date: Thu, 26 Jan 2017 20:56:30 GMT
>       Server: example-server
>       Last-Modified: Thu, 26 Jan 2017 20:57:10 GMT
>       ETag: "b34aed893a4c"
>
>
> Notes
> -----
> The date in the Last-Modified field of the response HTTP header should be
> greater than the date in the If-Unmodified-Since field of the request HTTP
> header.
>
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8040 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-18)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : RESTCONF Protocol
> Publication Date    : January 2017
> Author(s)           : A. Bierman, M. Bjorklund, K. Watsen
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>