Re: [netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-25: (with COMMENT)

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> Wed, 01 May 2019 19:02 UTC

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From: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-25: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-25: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

Thanks for the review.  Some thoughts in-line...

> From: Alissa Cooper , Wednesday, May 1, 2019 2:08 PM
> 
> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-25: No Objection
> 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> = Section 1.3 =
> 
> "Also note that transport specific transport drafts based on this
>    specification MUST detail the life cycle of dynamic subscriptions, as
>    well as the lifecycle of configured subscriptions (if supported)."
> 
> I think this would be clearer if it said "transport-specific documents."

√Čric Vyncke caught this one too.  Let's go with "transport specific specifications".

> = Section 2.5 =
> 
> Please expand VRF on first use.

Done.   

Eric

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