[netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 14 May 2019 20:44 UTC

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Subject: [netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: (with COMMENT)
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Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: No Objection

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= Section 9 =

        "Access control must be set so that only someone
      with proper access permissions, and perhaps even HTTP session has
      the ability to access this resource."

There is a grammar error in this sentence -- "perhaps even HTTP session"
doesn't follow from the antecedent.