[netmod] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-08: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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— Section 4.1 —

I find the BCP 14 “SHOULD” in this section to be odd, and would lower-case
 them.

   When needed, this effort again
   SHOULD be automated to reduce effort and errors resulting from manual
   processing.

This sentence is really awkward: “when needed”, the use of “effort” twice, and
the uncertainty of whether the clause “resulting from manual processing”
applies to both effort and errors, or only to the latter.  I would say it this
way:

NEW
This work should also be automated to reduce the effort and to reduce errors
resulting from manual processing. END

— Section 6 —

         assumes that the continuation begins at the character that is
         not a space character (' ') on the following line.

Should be “at the first character”.

— Section 7.1.1 —

   The second line is a blank line.

The code in the appendix generates an *empty* line (no text).  Is that what you
mean by “blank line”?  Will a line that contains only space characters (*looks*
the same) work also?  The code in the appendix appears to discard the second
line without checking its content at all.  I think you should be clearer about
what qualifies as a “blank line”.  (This also applies to Section 8.1.1.)

— Section 7.2.1 —

   If this text content needs to and can be folded, insert the header
   described in Section 7.1.1, ensuring that any additional printable
   characters surrounding the header does not result in a line exceeding
   the desired maximum.

Should be “do not result” (to match the plural “printable characters”).