[netmod] Comments on draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext

"Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com> Tue, 06 November 2018 03:05 UTC

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From: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>
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Subject: [netmod] Comments on draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext
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Hi,


  *   In section 2.2 1st paragraph the text says “…moved to this document and updated”. It would be clearer if there was a list/description of what’s been updated in 2.2 or a reference to another section where the update to RC yang-data is described.
  *   In example in A.2, should “yd:augment-yang-data /address-book/address” contain the module prefix? P8 has yd:augment-yang-data /foo:foo-con and the description mentions absolute-schema-nodeid

Regards,
Reshad.