Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8407 (5800)

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Fri, 09 August 2019 10:24 UTC

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From: tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
CC: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>
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Andy

As author of RFC8407, I wonder what your thoughts are on this.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Kent Watsen" <kent+ietf@watsen.net>;
To: "RFC Errata System" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;
Cc: "Andy Bierman" <andy@yumaworks.com>;; "Ignas Bagdonas"
<ibagdona@gmail.com>;; "Warren Kumari" <warren@kumari.net>;; "Joel
Jaeggli" <joelja@bogus.com>;; "Lou Berger" <lberger@labn.net>;; "tom
petch" <daedulus@btconnect.com>;; <netmod@ietf.org>;
Sent: Wednesday, July 31, 2019 4:54 PM
Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8407 (5800)


This errata should be accepted.

Kent


> On Jul 31, 2019, at 10:36 AM, RFC Errata System
<rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; wrote:
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8407,
> "Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG
Data Models".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5800
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: tom Petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>;
>
> Section: appendix b
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>       "WG Web:   <http://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/your-wg-name/>
> .....
>        (http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info).
>
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>       "WG Web:   <https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/your-wg-name/>
> .....
>        (https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info).
>
>
> Notes
> -----
> Appendix A rightly says that these URL should have a scheme of https:
> but Appendix B wrongly specifies http:
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8407 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-20)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of
Documents Containing YANG Data Models
> Publication Date    : October 2018
> Author(s)           : A. Bierman
> Category            : BEST CURRENT PRACTICE
> Source              : Network Modeling
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG