Re: [OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Tue, 13 August 2019 18:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
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Thanks for the review Stewart and my apologies for the slow response - I
left on a longish summer family vacation the day before the review email
hit my inbox.

I've fixed the nit by using "JSON Web Token (JWT)" on that first use in the
source controlled editor's xml version and it'll show up in the next draft
revision.


On Tue, Jul 30, 2019 at 11:35 AM Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:

> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2019-07-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-05
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: A well written document ready for publication.  It has one very
> minor
> nit that needs to be addressed at some point.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:  JWT is not in the well known list and does not
> seem
> to be expanded on first use,
>
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