Re: [OAUTH-WG] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-native-apps-11: (with COMMENT)

Thanks Alexey and Brian.

In my staged
<https://github.com/WilliamDenniss/draft-ietf-oauth-native-apps/pull/9/files>
copy, I've added a reference to RFC7230, which according to IANA
<https://www.iana.org/assignments/uri-schemes/uri-schemes.xhtml> holds the
definition of the https scheme.  Will be included in the next update.

I also verified that our Section 2 includes "NOT RECOMMENDED" per the
errata.

On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 9:20 AM, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
wrote:

> On Wed, May 24, 2017, at 05:17 PM, Brian Campbell wrote:
>
> As far as I can tell, 'NOT RECOMMENDED' is fine per RFC 2119.
>
>
> from https://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt
>
> 4. SHOULD NOT   This phrase, *or the phrase "NOT RECOMMENDED"* mean that
>    there may exist valid reasons in particular circumstances when the
>    particular behavior is acceptable or even useful, but the full
>    implications should be understood and the case carefully weighed
>    before implementing any behavior described with this label.
>
> And also this errata notes that NOT RECOMMENDED should be in the first part of the abstract https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=2119&eid=499
>
>
> Never mind then!
>
>
> On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 9:27 AM, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
> wrote:
>
> Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-oauth-native-apps-11: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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>
> A couple of nits:
>
> 8.2.  OAuth Implicit Grant Authorization Flow
>
>    The OAuth 2.0 implicit grant authorization flow as defined in
>    Section 4.2 of OAuth 2.0 [RFC6749] generally works with the practice
>    of performing the authorization request in the browser, and
> receiving
>    the authorization response via URI-based inter-app communication.
>    However, as the Implicit Flow cannot be protected by PKCE (which is
> a
>    required in Section 8.1), the use of the Implicit Flow with native
>    apps is NOT RECOMMENDED.
>
> NOT RECOMMENDED is not actually a construct allowed by RFC 2119, I think
> you should reword it using "SHOULD NOT".
>
> It would be good to add RFC reference for HTTPS URIs.
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