[OPSAWG] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-10
Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> Wed, 21 November 2018 18:15 UTC
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Subject: [OPSAWG] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-10
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Reviewer: Al Morton Review result: Has Nits The draft appears to have been reviewed by (someone in the) IDR working group (good). Parts of the draft have been clarified to identify when the IPFIX components are in use. Some grammatical nits remain, and any language checker will identify them.