Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt

On Sep 30, 2019, at 17:17, Dmytro Shytyi <ietf.dmytro@shytyi.net<mailto:ietf.dmytro@shytyi.net>> wrote:

Dear members of opsawg,

Recently we uploaded a draft about uCPE management.

You are invited to answer few questions regarding the draft https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt.

One thing that would help with reviews is if you cleaned up this YANG module.  Consider using pyang -f yang --keep-comments to generate something well-formatted, and —canonical to check ordering.  In particular, your revisions are out of order.

Question1: Do you find a difinition of uCPE is well explained? If no what could be improved?

I think it is, but as a vendor that makes such a device, I may not be the right person to ask.  What I mean is that I inherently understand the concept.

It would be good if others perhaps that use such devices could weigh in.

Joe

      You may answer: I agree with definition. OR I think it could be modified...
Question2: Do you think there is enough examples of internal uCPE service and usecases that are well depicted.
      You may answer: The examples and usecases are well explained. OR The usecases need improvements.
Question3: Do you find that yang model should stay unchanged regarding the phy interfaces. Maybe one may think about "ietf interface" instead of  "phyInterface".
      You may answer: The yang model looks good for me. OR The yang model needs more improvements(which improvements).
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Best Regards,
Dmytro SHYTYI

---- On Thu, 26 Sep 2019 18:01:14 +0200 <internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> wrote ----

A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt
has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the
IETF repository.

Name:        draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm
Revision:    01
Title:        A YANG Module for uCPE management.
Document date:    2019-09-26
Group:        Individual Submission
Pages:        15
URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt
Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/
Htmlized: https://tools.ietf..org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01>
Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm
Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01

Abstract:
This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM)
and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves
as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises
Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network
Service Orchestrator.

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