Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt

[Dmytro Shytyi <[e-mail]>]

Hello Joe,

Thank you for your comment.



In the new version:
We updated the existing yang model according to your suggestions(now the nits and validation logs seem to be clear).

We expanded the uCPE management yang model with interface model from RFC 8343( A YANG Data Model for Interface Management)

Now there are 3 yang files that you may strip from I-D:

vsym-service.yang

modified ietf-interfaces.yang (augments vsym-service.yang)

ietf-vsym-interfaces.yang (augments vsum-service.yang and has ref to "vLinks" from vsym-service).








A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt

has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the

IETF repository.



Name:        draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm

Revision:    02

Title:        A YANG Module for uCPE management.

Document date:    2019-10-08

Group:        Individual Submission

Pages:        40

URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt

Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/

Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02

Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm

Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02



Abstract:

This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM)

and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves

as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises

Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network

Service Orchestrator.









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---- On Mon, 07 Oct 2019 15:50:40 +0200 Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[e-mail]> wrote ----








On Sep 30, 2019, at 17:17, Dmytro Shytyi <mailto:[e-mail]> wrote:



Dear members of opsawg,



Recently we uploaded a draft about uCPE management. 


You are invited to answer few questions regarding the draft https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt.






One thing that would help with reviews is if you cleaned up this YANG module.  Consider using pyang -f yang --keep-comments to generate something well-formatted, and —canonical to check ordering.  In particular, your
 revisions are out of order.





Question1: Do you find a difinition of uCPE is well explained? If no what could be improved?







I think it is, but as a vendor that makes such a device, I may not be the right person to ask.  What I mean is that I inherently understand the concept.



It would be good if others perhaps that use such devices could weigh in.



Joe



      You may answer: I agree with definition. OR I think it could be modified...

Question2: Do you think there is enough examples of internal uCPE service and usecases that are well depicted.





      You may answer: The examples and usecases are well explained. OR The usecases need improvements.


Question3: Do you find that yang model should stay unchanged regarding the phy interfaces. Maybe one may think about "ietf interface" instead of  "phyInterface". 

      You may answer: The yang model looks good for me.  OR The yang model needs more improvements(which improvements).



______________

Best Regards,

Dmytro SHYTYI






---- On Thu, 26 Sep 2019 18:01:14 +0200  <mailto:[e-mail]> wrote ----




A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt
 has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the 
 IETF repository. 
 
 Name:        draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm 
 Revision:    01 
 Title:        A YANG Module for uCPE management. 
 Document date:    2019-09-26 
 Group:        Individual Submission 
 Pages:        15 
 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt 
 Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/ 
 Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01 
 Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm 
 Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01 
 
 Abstract: 
 This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM) 
 and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves 
 as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises 
 Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network 
 Service Orchestrator. 
 
 
 
 
 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission 
 until the htmlized version and diff are available at http://tools.ietf.org. 
 
 The IETF Secretariat 
 









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