[Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-dual-homing-coordination-05: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 01 March 2017 22:56 UTC

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Subject: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-dual-homing-coordination-05: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-dual-homing-coordination-05: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just a couple of editorial comments:

- Abstract: The parenthetical phrase " (management plane based)" makes
the sentence structure more confusing that if the phrase were simply
removed.

- Section 1: A few abbreviations that were expanded in the abstract
should be expanded again in the body.

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