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Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-local-protection-enforcement-10: (with COMMENT)

James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com> Thu, 22 June 2023 17:39 UTC

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From: James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>
To: "Andrew Stone (Nokia)" <andrew.stone@nokia.com>, John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
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Subject: Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-local-protection-enforcement-10: (with COMMENT)
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Looks good, thanks Andrew!

Jim

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From: Andrew Stone (Nokia) <andrew.stone@nokia.com>
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To: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>; James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-pce-local-protection-enforcement@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org; pce-chairs@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-local-protection-enforcement-10: (with COMMENT)

Hi Jim,

Thank you for the review. I've made the following changes locally and will be pushing with the next revision:

- Updated abstract to remark document updates RFC5440.
- Changed RFC7525 reference to RFC9325.
- Fixed the non-ascii text.

New nits result: Summary: 0 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 0 warnings (==), 1 comment (--).

Regarding reference to work pre-RFC5378, too be honest I'm having difficulty navigating through (https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info) and the related TLP to determine what would constitute requiring a disclaimer. In general I agree with John in that there isn't substantial material directly from RFC5440, beyond the one sentence reference quote in section 4.1.

Thanks
Andrew



On 2023-06-19, 3:03 PM, "John Scudder" <jgs@juniper.net <mailto:jgs@juniper.net>> wrote:

Thanks for the review, Jim. Regarding the warning about pre-RFC5378 work, I think it might not apply in this case, since AFAICT there isn’t substantial material from RFC 5440 incorporated into the present document. But of course, the authors should consider this and make their own determination.


The other two nits should be fixed, I’m sorry I didn’t catch these in my own review.


—John


> On Jun 19, 2023, at 10:42 AM, Jim Guichard via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
...
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> === Comments ===
>
> - from idnits -> The draft header indicates that this document updates
> RFC5440, but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
>
> - from idnits - the authors should check the miscellaneous warnings,
> especially paying attention to the comments re: RFC 5378. I do not see
> anything in the shepherd write-up about this.
>
> - Section 9 - Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7525 (Obsoleted by RFC
> 9325)

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