[Pce] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10: (with COMMENT)
Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Wed, 30 August 2017 01:32 UTC
Return-Path: <adam@nostrum.com>
X-Original-To: pce@ietf.org
Delivered-To: pce@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5725B124207; Tue, 29 Aug 2017 18:32:48 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
From: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp@ietf.org, Julien Meuric <julien.meuric@orange.com>, pce-chairs@ietf.org, julien.meuric@orange.com, pce@ietf.org
X-Test-IDTracker: no
X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.59.0
Auto-Submitted: auto-generated
Precedence: bulk
Message-ID: <150405676835.21577.565250320006836641.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
Date: Tue, 29 Aug 2017 18:32:48 -0700
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/pce/u_Hct67-R04y5H43b9gPHi1oqA4>
Subject: [Pce] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10: (with COMMENT)
X-BeenThere: pce@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
List-Id: Path Computation Element <pce.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/pce>, <mailto:pce-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/pce/>
List-Post: <mailto:pce@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:pce-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce>, <mailto:pce-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 01:32:48 -0000
Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Section 5.1 defines the PCInititate Message, and is generally pretty good about indicating where its component elements come from; however, it's missing pointers to <LSP>, <END-POINTS>, and <ERO>. I think you want to add: "<LSP>, <END-POINTS>, and <ERO> are defined in [RFC5440]". Section 5.3 indicates that an indication that the PCC is supposed to pick the source address is signaled by using a source address of "0.0.0.0" -- presumably, if the destination is an IPv6 address, this would instead use "::", right? Please add text that addresses the IPv6 case. I'm pretty certain that [I-D.ietf-pce-stateful-sync-optimizations] is a normative reference. Even though its use is optional, this document contains normative statements regarding its mechanism. See <https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/normative-informative.html> for guidance, and "Note 1" of that statement in particular.
- [Pce] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce… Adam Roach
- Re: [Pce] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf… Jonathan Hardwick