Re: [pcp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option-02.txt

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Mon, 09 February 2015 16:01 UTC

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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: Andreas Ripke <Andreas.Ripke@neclab.eu>, "pcp@ietf.org" <pcp@ietf.org>
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Dear Andreas, 

The new version looks good to me. Thank you for addressing the comments.

Cheers,
Med

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De : pcp [mailto:pcp-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Andreas Ripke
Envoyé : lundi 9 février 2015 16:50
À : pcp@ietf.org
Objet : Re: [pcp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option-02.txt

Dear all,

This new version addresses Med's comments.
The lifetimes of the error result codes are added in section 4.1.
RFC6887 is cited and wording is changed in section 7.

We have responded to all matters raised during the WGLC.

Thanks again for reviewing.

Andreas

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> Subject: [pcp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option-02.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Port Control Protocol Working Group of the
> IETF.
> 
>         Title           : PCP Third Party ID Option
>         Authors         : Andreas Ripke
>                           Rolf Winter
>                           Thomas Dietz
>                           Juergen Quittek
>                           Rafael Lopez da Silva
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option-02.txt
> 	Pages           : 12
> 	Date            : 2015-02-09
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes a new Port Control Protocol (PCP) option
>    called THIRD_PARTY_ID.  It is designed to be used in combination with
>    the THIRD_PARTY option specified in RFC 6887 but can also be used
>    without it.  The THIRD_PARTY_ID serves to identify a Third Party in
>    situations where a third party's IP address contained in the
>    THIRD_PARTY option does not provide sufficient information to create
>    requested mappings in a PCP-controlled device.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option-02
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pcp-third-party-id-option-02
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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