[ppsp] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-ppsp-base-tracker-protocol-12: (with COMMENT)

"Barry Leiba" <barryleiba@computer.org> Thu, 07 January 2016 08:33 UTC

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Subject: [ppsp] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-ppsp-base-tracker-protocol-12: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ppsp-base-tracker-protocol-12: No Objection

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Version -12 addresses my DISCUSS points and almost all of my comments. 
Thanks very much for the work on this.

Two non-critical things remain, if you don't mind another minor update:

In Section 4, I would prefer that you add the section reference for 
Content-Type, like this:

OLD
the Content-Type field in HTTP/1.1 [RFC7231],
NEW
the Content-Type field in HTTP/1.1 (Section 3.1.1.5 of [RFC7231]),
END

But that's not critical, and the HTTP references are OK now.

I also still prefer that you change the title of Section 8.1 to "Media 
Type Registration" ... but also not critical.

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